The question that many people wonder is the reason why people in Hawaii like to play with fireworks on New Year’s Eve. Fireworks are dangerous and cause many fire hazards but think about it, Hawaii is the only state in the entire country that is allowed to play with these things on this day. This is what makes Hawaii unique in its own way. If people choose to illegalize fireworks in the state of Hawaii, the people of Hawaii won’t have that one unique day that makes us different from the rest of the united states.
Monday, January 11, 2010
Fighting Fire With Fire
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Hi Austin,
ReplyDeleteYou have a good title and you do take a stand in the blog. What's needed are more specific examples or evidence to support your points. Right now, it is mostly reasons, without the specifics to back it up.
Also watch mechanics, the name of our country is capitalized...that's a pretty careless error.
assessment score: 3/2
mrs s